i have amended my script to include a new idea. the new idea is to include the sensitive area of losing a child, leading to the sadneess of both parties rather then just the mother. i am making the characters alot more human through out so they would be alot more emotional. the cutting of some other ideas like the original audio that would have been used would be cut and also some of the panning scenes.
these have all been made and now i will be concenttrating on other aspects like risk assessment, prop list and recodring actors voices for finding of tone.
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